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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In Chapter 4, I think a few words may have been left out here and there. Like the sentence when Hermione runs up to greet Ron and Luna. And in a few of the ones describing their encounter in the dressing room. You might want to double check the chapter. Other than that, I am enjoying the story and find this pairing unusual, yet believable.
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes an update! Well, one thing is for sure and that is Lucius is by no way done with Luna yet. But, the idea of Draco and Luna together isn't bad either. ;)
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Found this story by chance - great job! Lucius, Draco and Luna! Never would have thought of it, but one of the best combos I can think of. Few grammar mistakes, but apart from that awesome!
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you managed to update this fic, I love it!!! & now it's getting even more interesting with Draco up against his father. Fab story!! Update again soon!!
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm I think you should keep writing this fic.
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
write more to this fic.
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the pairing of Draco/Luna but I hadn't thought of her with Lucius before. I thoguht you wrote it very well, especially Lucius possession and Draco's obssession, very Malfoyish I thought!
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOT=)
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September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was great!
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September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyable read, he'll end up getting her pregnant, oh I bet she'd really get naughty then.