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for After the war was over

by Lucie

person heather
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was such a moving story. i loved it
person Alison
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a great story! I just came across it today and HAD to finish reading it!

Thanks for writing! =o)
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How touching that ceremony was, I could really picture it in my minds eye.
person Grittie
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your beatiful story. It actually made me cry, and believe me that doesn't happen much. It was well written and both inspiring and entertaining. I love the way you portray Harry. I am sorry that it is over, but grateful that you finished it. Thank you!
Cathy Cathy_Mac@yahoo.com
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man. The last lines of that chapter made me want to cry. Ididnt becuase i dont cry that easy, but i wanted to. =)
person Phelia
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit I feel a bit uncomfortable about the kinky sex after Draco has been hurt so much. I guess he trusts Harry, but it somehow feels wrong. I expected he would freak out if he woke up bound. Also he is a bit to weak for my taste, he was only passive the whole time and it seemed the boys would never be equals in that relationship because Draco had no spirit left.

Otherwise, it was I great story, I loved your writing style and your description of everything was very well done.
person Draconayzia
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely story (and thank you for kicking those two assholes in the pants). I hope you write another chapter, but even if you don't this does have that fairy tale ending. Thank you for sharing it.
person l'etje
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waw this was soooooooo sweet i really like it
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person l'etje
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a wondrful story, i really rally like it
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Jo
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I love it. It's written so beautifully. I cried quite a bit, but I laughed too. Thank you for sharing this!