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for Hungry Like The Wolf

by Rumpelyssa

person SmileZ
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o0o. who's Fenrir? I hate to say it but I STILL haven't read book six yet... sooo uhh who's Fenrir? Sounds like a Werewolf king or something... hold on.. there's not goint to be in beastality in here right? cuz Hermione needs to be with HOT sexy Slytherin guys.. not GRIMY, ICKY, Dog breath...(shudders) (see if it was Sesshoumaru or Inuyasha then that would be fine cuz they are.. -drools-) All I'm asking is... Is this Fenrir dude cute? lol. It seems I'm reviewing all of your stories now isn't it? That's cuz you're such a GREAT author, but I still think 'A strange Love' is NUMBER ONE! I'm feeling your SS/HG in here. Hehe... Gosh so sexy
person LadyErinSnape
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When they were going over the information about the chickens I knew Severus wouldn't be stupid enough to purposely leave them a trail to follow.

I liked the way that you had Hermione trust Severus. She may not like his attitude but she does respect him (although as a SS/HG shipper that could be where my thoughts are coming from). Most of the Order only trusted him because Dumbledore told them he was trustworthy and the end of HBP where they shocked because Dumbledore trusted him I think highlighted that.

Wonderful Order bits (and of course the delightful Remus/Tonks bits).
person LadyErinSnape
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. I liked the way that you had both Severus and Harry think of their mothers (in different circumstances of course, but it was fascinating).

Arthur and the way that he comforted Harry was nice to read, the man doesn't really get enough credit.

The wonderfully sexy Fenrir is back and what a way to make him appear. I'm curious to see what his reaction to finding out that he took Tonks will be.
person LadyErinSnape
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
person LadyErinSnape
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And I am finally caught up, lol.

Fenrir was amazing this chapter; incredibly possessive and his pack mentality wanting a monarchy was just wonderful. Fenrir being the blood play type makes sense.

I am looking forward to the next update.
person Dee Dee
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow so the werewolf is going to play with Tonks. I guess he could use her to exchange for the real Hermione. Wonder if he will send a ransom note to the Order or Hermione? Will Snape go for it with Hermione before the werewolf get to her? Please update soon!
person cateye
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was the best chapter yet! Finally Fenrir&Hermione togeather I can't wait to see what happens in the nextchapter. I loved the kissing seen with Hermione&Severus even though this is is a Fenrir/Hermione story I Hermione and Severus get to have more lemons[i love severus by the way] I hope the order is'nt to hard on Remus he did the best he could.And I wish everyone would realize that there is a reason Albus trusted Severus and be nicer to him theres always a reason for everything!
person Avanell
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ENjoyed it once again. He is mad, I can't wait to see what he plans to do with Hermione. Is he really hideous?
person lisa
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh noooo. Poor Hermione. But that was nice between her and Severus. and Fenrir seriously needs to learn some manners lol. not that he will. Awesome chappie. and I will be awaiting some Fenrir action. just Poor Hermione. Please update again soon.
person angel
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awesome i love it .. and does remus rememeber it is a full moon or the blue moon ..please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now....

angel