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You want some suggestions? Okay, here's a couple. Next time use toys! A dildo, a butt plug, nipple clamps, That neat electric thing found in this story: http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600015323 , vibrators (either in the anus or on the cock ring) the thing you stick up the pee slit (bonus if it vibrates), cock ring again, little round things that lick like mouths when you put them somewhere! Maybe some food play, like covering Harry in choclate. Wax and Ice, makes a nice contrast. Edible body paint. A potion to over stimulate Harry's nerves making everything more intense. Kitty Ears, makes Harry even cuter! He's a lover to a potions Master, use that! That's all I can think of off the top of my head. Can you tell I've read too many fics on this site? Wonderful Job so far, when you write more, please email me at storylistener@earthlink.net Hope I helped. Thanks!

I just found this story! It was so darn kinky. I love Harry and his ability to take both men! It would be fun to see him in other situations: maybe out to eat naked with a glamour that makes him appear clothed. Harry would like that, especially if Draco and Severus could see him as he truly was.

a full out bondage session would be nice, whips chains suspension, even role playiing student teacher type thing

gods i love sub harry dom sev

Please update soon.

"causing Harry and Draco to scream and cum down each others throats."

you forgot the cock ring ;)

Love yur story

hey u make it a mpreg.i know for sure u would do good writing as i am bliis ully grinning like the cat who got the cream after reading these three chapters please continue or else i woud ed up bawling like an idiot because of u.

ok, you asked for it,,have them both inside harry,at the same time,,,then have one or both use a engorgement spell,,making them swell more,,but slowly..as they start to cum, have them become magicly bonded...this is good so far, keep up the good work

Maybe you can make a fic between Harry Potter and a YYHakusho - a slash of Hiei/Harry ..... this is my opinion.......

Harry could be disaplined for not following orders or doing something not allowed

awesome so far. I have tons of good ideas. You can have the three of them having sex in public, water sports (if you know what i mean), having some beach fun (going to a nude beach perhaps), pools are fun too. Oh you can have someone trying to check out harry in a club and and Draco and Sev get jealous. Ah another good idea is Harry being watched while he 'serviced' Draco and Sev. Favorite, have harry dress like a lolita girl wearing a frilly dress or a girl's uniform while his Professor Draco and Professor Severus punish hive for indecient exposure. Anyway that's a few ideas. If you need more than just let me know.