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for Invisible

by megredraven

person Addie
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm... Seconds Please!!!!
person castle
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well the first chapter was kind of boring but this second one was so funny. please keep writing.
person Sam
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting name, intriguing start, now I'm just waiting for your next chapter.
person Sai
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really intresting start, I like your character already. I'll be looking out for updates.
person addie
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update plz!!!!