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for Invisible

by megredraven

person Watcho
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So I was just taking a gander at this little story....oh and your welcome for being your human typewriter... but anyways to what i was saying...It's almost been a year since you posted this story...we should celebrate! I'm thinking like 5 chapters in two hours! HA
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, and can
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wierd, interesting. should make for some good lemons. I would slow it down though. take some time, build the story and the set, really get into it, dont just fly through it. Its worth it as a writer. can't wait for the update. those pictures should be good.
person Watcho
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good....very good indeed...however...HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!!!????!!!!??? BLAISE?? LOVES DRACO??? WHAT THE FUCK MEG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! however...it was tasty....hmmmmmm.....BUT WHAT THE FUCK!!!!!!!!
person Lain-chan!
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL i really like your story plz update soon
person Blair
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, more please
person Saryn
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot. Please update soon, I want to see what Draco and Blaise have planned.
person Addie
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
write more.... and by the way...niiiiiiiiiiiiiice
person Blair
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, i can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
person Saryn
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please update as soon as you can!