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Dearest,

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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Good story, but you do need a beta.

So glad to see an update to this story! Poor Hermione, life is going really downhill for her, thats for sure. Severus deserved the words she told him, he might have rejected the woman after Hermione left, but he was very chummy with her when Hermione found them, she has all reason to be mad at him, especially after the words they had at the headmasters office about her fidelity. I hope you will find some happiness for her.

Well, everyone seems to be hot and bothered. I think Hermione should give Severus a run for the money just for the entertainment value. I'm enjoying this story very much and hope for frequent updates.

Can you please update this story too please,

ch 11 - Intriguing. I'm having a little trouble believing the scene where Hermione and Sev discuss sex, and she blurts out her attraction - not sure if its the situation or the dialog I'm having trouble with.

I am looking forward to more.

ohhh my goodness. Now the negotiations begin and lol. Severus' grandfather omg he saud the f word. That was funny. and thats just crazy deciding when they will and how much they will and all that. I can see discussing children but lol I guess so she cant deny him the chance to have children. hehe He's man so he should be like any male. and I am glad Severus seems to be thinking things through. Good chappie. Funny. Lol more more more please. Please update soon.

Ohhh I love it another chappie. Lol already a test of wills there. Poor Severus and Hermione they are in for quite a ride as stubborn as those two are. I see Severus won though. lol Good chappie. Cant wait for more. Please ohh please update soon.