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for Startling Revelations

by gcgirl345

person ranapuella
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow very good. i liked it and want more :-p
good job
person Lenore
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was actually really good. I enjoyed that a lot. Keen on wrighting please!
person tori
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious loved it, making out in front of everyone. Malfoys got to be freaking out now.
person L_C
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooooh very good! nothing better than a fight that turns into a hot kiss!

look forward to chapter 2
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A great start.Please continue