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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh that was definitely HOTTTTTTTT please continue because you are doing an awesome job!!!
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very great start, and exactly how I figured the two of them would get together! Can we say sexual tension? The books and even the movies are full of both. I love your characterizations, though I was sad about the Weasleys who died in the war. Then again... someone had to. Ron's great, and I loved Hermione's reaction. (Though some part of me was hoping she'd come up with a plan for Harry to beat Draco into the wall (er... did I mean that pun? ;) every morning so Ron would eat) I'm eagerly awaiting more. ~Sin
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think this fic is pretty damn good for being your first fic. i hope you keep going with it. i wanna read the rest!
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! i really like where this story is going! well written although i do have to point out that while there are no actual spelling mistakes, there are grammatical errors and fixing these can only make the story that much easy to read... nothing major just things like 'your' instead of 'you're' in certain places etc... if you would like a helping hand or a beta, feel free to send me an email otherwise well done! keep up the good work!
stef
stef
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i can't wait for more. much more of this.
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Great job! Draco's got a really funny way of flirting! Can't wait to see more!
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omfg, please update soon!!!
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job so far. Can't wait to read more.
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww i love it
update soon please!
update soon please!
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue! continue! COOONTTIIINNNUEEE! :D