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for Startling Revelations

by gcgirl345

person HarrynDraco's_Melissa
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Start! Update soon!
person L7
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh boy that chapter was as HOTTTT as the first I am LOVING this story right now and I can't get enough of it I sooo want more!!! Great Job =] please update soon <3
person R
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story!!! It's exciting, fun, and well written! I can't wait for more, keep up the great work and please update soon!
person stef
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh *moans* stuuupid ron! stick with him for once dammit! love the passion of this story and the way you write it!
keep it up
Stef
person Amessis
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved that! And Draco was right- Ron isn't really much of a friend if he can't support Harry's choices. What an ass Ron is being!
person Moyima
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great work! I can't wait to see more!
person Lace
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, I've read so many stories where Ron automatically accepts Harry being with Malfoy, but this one is actually how I've thought it may actually be in the book. He will accept it eventually, though, right? I sure hope so.

Anyway, great chapter! Please update soon!
person Lace
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really good! I love how you did the kiss; it looks like somebody has a crush... I also saw no grammar or spelling mistakes, which I usually catch, so that's very good. Please update soon, if only for me.

-Lace
person Rawben
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh! i'm excited! you should keep going!
person Amessis
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a great start! I can't believe Harry ran away though- I hope he figures himself out soon.