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for Slytherin Saviors

by Ariande

person Moyima
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a fantastic story. I love resorting fics, and this one is looking to be very good. I can't wait to see more!
person Amessis
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done again! I love this.
person fallangelsquill
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm... I love this fic, which is quite an accomplishment, since I generally hate angst fics, but I got sucked into yours. I'm not sure I like the reference to anorexia. It seems a little out of place and over the top. I wouldn't go that far if I were you, but it COULD be well done. you might have to stray into bulemia if you wanted to keep it up because of Draco's interference... but, if you've ever lived with a bulemic person, you know that the signs, if not the smells, are dead obvious, so that wouldn't really work either. um, the only other option would be dead rebellion or sneakiness that they'd already be watching for, like pouring the potions out... I like the spin you take on the slytherin house, very creative without completely breaking away from the characters. good job! all around a great fic, hugs and kisses!
person amyordinary
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! This is really interesting... I can't wait for more!
person InsanityComplex
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
write more, write faster!!!!
person Storm
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great second chapter. Very interesting. Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.
person XxBatsxX
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha it was like "In Yo Face" xDD Draco was like all scared and shit Hahaha nice. Please update! PLEASE! ;o;
person Fallen
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I already Love this story please update soon!
person hakkyou
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds very interesting!! Can't wait for the next part!
person Larimar
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is starting our wonderfully! Your writing is terrific! Please update soon, I like where this story is goin. Nice to see that Harry isn't a complete victim.