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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you dealt with the aftermath of the first chapter. Harry's response of first utter panic and humiliation was very real and believable, and his finally coming to terms with it and stating him mind was a relief. What Severus did to try and make an impossible situation better for Harry was incredibly sweet. And last but not least - kudos on the amount of innuendo you managed to pack into the last three chapters! This series is great fun!
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very amusing chapter to read; though I do think I agree with Harry being mad at them. I really am looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the excellent work!~Sophia
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! ha ha ha, I can't stop laughing even as I type this out. Gods I don't think I have ever laugh so hard before, this last chapter was hilarious (CH. 4), keep up the great writhing, please update soon ^_^
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so damn funny! Humor and angst. I hope you make Harry feel better soon. I like it better as humor.
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I would say that this story is great, but seeing as there is more then one story that I love, I would have to tell you that your a great writer. So Please Update on your Stories soon.^_^
Oh! and before I forget, love that fact that you made Harry a screamer, only wish he wasn't so insecure and have more self esteem; maybe someone other then Sev. could make sure to reassure him in this department. Can't wait to read what is going to happen when Harry comes down to the kitchen.
Oh! and before I forget, love that fact that you made Harry a screamer, only wish he wasn't so insecure and have more self esteem; maybe someone other then Sev. could make sure to reassure him in this department. Can't wait to read what is going to happen when Harry comes down to the kitchen.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus and Harry having to put with their teasing. I really hope they listen to Severus and don't laugh or make any jokes. I don't think Harry could take it. Keep up the great work!!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha! i normally dont tend to read harry/severus fics but this one just caught my eye for some reason... poor self-concious harry! loving the protective!snapey! well done and hope to see more soon!
Stef
Stef
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story. So passionate, fevered and full of emotion. *Really well written sex with heart* is LOVE.
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very interesting start hope you go on
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's fantastic! So well written, and I was laughing at the end, brilliant! I hope you write some more sometime!