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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol that was fun. wish there was more to it, but fun none the less.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting take, and nice twist at the end.
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kick ass story! i loved it! Especially the end! Can't wait to read more of your work!
Tiffany
Tiffany
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*coughs gaggs and spits out her tea* OMG I just had a shock, damn give me a heart attack.
Awesome story, great writing.. I must read more..
Your a great author and I would have never figured out it was Severus. My god that was awesome.....
I never guessed and was shocked at the end. You have a great knack for writing and keeping your readers holding on.
Awesome story, great writing.. I must read more..
Your a great author and I would have never figured out it was Severus. My god that was awesome.....
I never guessed and was shocked at the end. You have a great knack for writing and keeping your readers holding on.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but honestly it needs lemons.
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I like that Severus is her boyfriend. It was an unusual situation, having to practically fight every man around you to protect and keep your girlfriend. Like all your one shots, it would make an excellent long story, with this as the last chapter.
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?