rate_review Reviews

I like this story except when you had Harry/Ryosuke use a double negative, "I don't take shit from no one." It jars with his character and the flow of the story. You have been portraying him as a well trained quiet Shinobi. Double negatives like that just don't work, becuase according to that sentence Harry/Ryosuke takes shit from anyone. I did like the eb and flow of the story though. I just hope there will be no more completely misplaced phrases.

hehehe that was great i love it and in glad ry took that well .. hmm i wonder what their misson is ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

this is great please keep up the good work. please update soon

I like it

wow that was great .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

angel