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for Trick or Treat

by roozie

person Britt
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so good... but so sad...love it. UPDATE
person Chavela
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH!

Girlfriend... you better not keep us waiting again for the next chapter! That last wait was evil! And I need to read the story! I am addicted.
Not a fan of rape. Hate reading about it, but that did not stop this chapter from being very good. And I am very glad that Hermione and Ginny stuck up for Draco. And about danced with glee when Draco said he loved and cared for Hermione. That was awesome!

PEACE♥
person Natyslacks
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woooo! another kick arse chapter, things are heating up and I can't wait to see what you have in store next for us! Update soon!
Love Natalie
person angel
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awesome ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person Anon
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really disliked the way you changed Draco's motivations. The first part of the first chapter is fine, but by the end of the first chapter you have a totally different Draco and an idiotic switch. Either do a romance or a rape fic, but don't switch it out like this. It's annoying and a bait and switch for readers.
person Dee Dee
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want more of your wonderful and scary story! It took me by surprise that Draco would confront his father to defend Hermione. I guess he really loves her! I wonder if Lucius was the only Death Eater out that night. It sounded like the woods were crawling with them, so maybe Hermione does not get away? Wander what happens to Draco after defying his father and the Dark Lord for a mudblood? If she gets away, will Hermione get help for Draco, maybe Snape? Enquiring minds want to know, so please update soon we miss you!

schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
god you have to keep writing this story please more
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person DaniD
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was quit a first chapter! WOW!! Powerful and sexy..So much happened there. It leaves us all chomping at the bit for more;D Bravo!
person menolly
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job leaving us hanging there!! Perfect theme for the month of October. Oh, and great job with the hotness too! Hehe! More soon?