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for Dance With The Devil

by alissaevans444

person LVanna
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my indeed. What a delicous mindfuck that was.
person angel
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~blink blink~ damn sev that was hot .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person nessie
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! it has me want to keep reading it over till there is a new chapter.
person lisa
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot Indeed! ohhh my. lol I cannot wait to see the wedding and the wedding night lol. more hotness please. Update soon.
person cateye
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story,I personally can't get enough of the marriage law stories.Can't wait for you too update!
person tabitha
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep going...make you version yours!
person CB13
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love these marriage law fics. Thanks for writing another one! May I respectfully suggest that you make your paragraphs a little bit shorter, or just use more space between them? Reading the big blocks is a little hard on the eyes.

Looking forward to the next chapter - and I love the "second wife" clause. That's a great twist!

Cheers

CB13
person angel
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. i love the marriage law fics ... and the hole second wife clause was a great . please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person lisa
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good start. you have my interests piqued. hope to see more.
person Akasha
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!! you meanie!!! how can you just leave it there?! ok, im over it. anywho! bad ass job, mate! keep going!!