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for Dance With The Devil

by alissaevans444

person lisa
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waahoooo!!!! Quite steamy, erotic and um titilating lol. I believe they do compliment each other well. Even though How Severus could murder two women after using them right before his wedding, uggg men such blasted lust filled beasts lol. Awesome story. Rl does get in the way of the creative flow. Glad you updated. Please update agaiun soon.
person Citten
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAH A NEW CHAPTER!!! you better (please) update sooner and lots more of what you just wrote! :) well they certainly do complament each other really well. update!.....please.
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yummy chapter! :P I am eagerly awaiting the next!
person angel
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe bath time fun .. that was hot .. i love it please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person angel
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... ~blink blink ~ that was hot i love it ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please more more i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Queen Celestia
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Particularly active? xD Dear Merlin. Hehe.
That just made me laugh. :)
person Queeny
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That widbrimmed flowery gloved Severus just TURNED ME ON! :D [to laughter!]
person Queen Celestia
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol nearly didn't make it to the bedroom. The nakedness levels comment made me laugh too... loved it.
person Citten
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you just can't update enough for me! the last three chapters have been wonderful! (and very quick on the updates :)) you are also not rushing the story and that makes it even better so thank you now the question that i have will they really wait until the end of the school year before they deside to have a baby or will something happen that will bring it about sooner than expected? if not that is fine too i was just asking and will they truely start showing signs of there true feeling, love, or whatever? well i will bewaiting for the next chapter!!!
person lisa
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh myy. Severus certainly wastes no time. I love how there is so much more to Severus than his being the cold harsh Potions Master Professor. Perhaps Hermione may teach him a lil about the other side of things. I love how he is honest and not ashamed of admitting what he is or what he feels. Good chappies. Love it. More please. Update soon Please.