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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update!
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:)
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought that you did the wedding very nicely. I didn't know how you were going to do the kiss at the end of the wedding. I was thinking that it might have been a bit awkward. Awesome job!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start, but I do have one thing to say. The children at Hogwarts, as with many other English schools turn 18 in their seventh and final year. In the books, Hermione is one of the eldest of her class, and therefore she would be 18 already a the time of this law, 19 if you count the use of timeturner. Also, this would mean that quite a lot of the people in her year would also get petitions.
I still want to say that I liked the first chapter, and I love the twist about the second marriage clause. Very slytherin!
I still want to say that I liked the first chapter, and I love the twist about the second marriage clause. Very slytherin!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story! I love where it is going. I can't wait til your next update. ~Izzy
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well da! who wouldn't have more sex after all that playful banter. i do hope that you will have another chapter for us sooner than you did this one. so really love the way that you have severus' character in this story unlike some who are ether worst or have him way too soft, etc. thanks for the chapter! hope to read more soon!:)
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was awesome i love it ... and man harry and ron are nosey... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Hmm now what is going to hapen in Diagon Alley?
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very good chapter! I like it, that snape seeks hermiones permission bevor he starts to satisfy his darker urges.