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for Dance With The Devil

by alissaevans444

person Anon
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great joke on Ch. 19. Keep up with the unrelated funnys after the fics, it keeps me appeased when you give a cliffy. I like cliffys, but am also impatient.
person angel
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was great .. hmm i cant wait in till then the next chapter .. did the twins experimental form of alcohol work .. that was a cute joke... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmm, yummy story
you must write more soon!
person Ally
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update
person Rosei
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Fan-fuckin-tastic!!
HOT! HOT! HOT!!
Gotta go, gotta take a cold
shower now. HA!
Thanks!
person msvanessa
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! I loved it.
person Anon
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cwertainly found your joke to be true and amusing. Had me laughing.
person angel
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was great i love it and how sev tryed to get out of the real reson why is was looking in her bags ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person aleja21
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chap, but I have to say I loved the joke at the end it made me laugh, thanx for that.
person moony
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi...i don't remember if I already reviewed this fic...I really like this plot of marriage law...so keep updatint and make your readers happy people :D