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for Dance With The Devil

by alissaevans444

person Shellnet
schedule September 12, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I  I ignore a lot but that whole time you keep using you instead of your is to much your belongs to you you're is you are your mother not you mother. you mother is only  appropriate in the case of something like I love you mother  not good with punctuation so I'm not sure what the punctuation between you and mother would be  But  I like it to sound right when I speak the words

person PhoneixFireSnape
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
soooooooo.... what happend to severus? lol Great story so far.. but needing to know what happend to sev!!!
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please please please please update i love the story
i need to know what happens
person Sarah Cobb
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story is so god please continue please
person Anon
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a brilliant story well done keep up the good work
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh! when is the next update.
i love tthis story so much i even re-read it two times. :)
person robyn
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its pretty good
person Tabi
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this was a very good chapter I cant wait until the next one. The Weasley's and their vodka..now that is something I would buy. I usually dont have what ppl would call a full hangover..Mine usually hits hours after I have been up with a headache. I really would buy some of theirs. I wonder what this punishment is going to be like. Its nice to see that Mione is warming up to him very nicely...

Keep up the good work.......

Until next chapter.......Tabi