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by ifyouweremine

person Kitsune Spyk (not logged in)
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG~~!!!!!! WTF~~!!!!!!! I really didn't expect that. You pulled that twist off nicely... i had tears in my eyes about half way through, and at the end i was activly crying. That was... different to say the least... not bad but... different... anyway it was well written and original so you get major kudos for that... Wow I still can't get over it... Poor poor Draco he loves Harry so much he can't let him go even after he's left... So sweet... So sad...
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg that was good....but it made me cry....still good thou

*~*Lilith leFey*~*
person silverjadlyn
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! One chapter, and you have me hooked- this story is so good, made me teary eyed~
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What the hell happend to him. That was very chilling bur it just cant stop there. Theres a story there I know it, it could goooooo places! lol continue I know you probably get that alot but i'm seriouse you have too!
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL holy shit! I JUST GOT THAT! lol eeeeewwww! lol but still chilling and After I was done pukeing I had to like cry a river for poor Draco! I feel really stupid not getting that Harry had died. Bur now that I do, cant someone like shoot Draco, I know it sounds insensitve but he's obviously lost his mind since Harrys gone. And that cant't be hygenic or healthy for that matter. Oh god poor Draco.
person Bouvais
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I don't quite know what to say. It was very well written. I guess I shouldn't have been surprised since you did warn me. Once I got over the "eww" factor, I actually laughed. Well done.
person Victoria
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hah! The twist was what I thought it would be, so no crying and weirdedoutness for me. As to what that says about me...
person KateL
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No sh*t on the squick...ahhh, necrophilia! Draco's gone 'round the bend and Harry is oh so dead...you done good! Happy Halloween or Samhain, whatever floats your boat!
person Anon
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Corspe? Did you say corspe? As in a dead body, corspe? lol surely I am being blimy and there is another meaning? Somehow I doubt it. Very well written. And...unique plot.
person neko
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i figured what the squick was whan he didn't answer him about the first two times... never read one of these before nsick but interesting