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for My Immortal

by BitterWind

person b
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha i just finished the song my immortal as i finished reading this... i like it...
-b
person N
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow.

that was heart-wrenching. its situations like these that always make you wonder. having regrets is such an awful awful feeling, but I completely understand Hermione's need to keep things quiet. I read the whole story holding my breath... and had tears at the end. great great job. it was a beautifully sad story. I wish you'd write more of them, but maybe not so sad next time ;)
person Allie
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
have you ever thought about hermione doing something and have harry find out about her feelings.
person thsunami
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was simply beautiful and very touching work of art i truly was both mover and greatly injoyed by it's sad beauty.
person pumpkin
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg....this is so sad, but so good, SO SAD!!
person Del
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was just.... wow. The ratings don't do this justice. Very well written. Wrong venue, definitely. But I loved it.
person Malinda
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*swallows lump in her throat* Please say that this isn't a one-shot. Please continue to a Harry/Hermione ending...pleeeeeeeeeeeease. That was brutal and I loved it sooo much, but what about H/Hr? Love always wins; always.
person DarrinX
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH MAN!!!! (Can't stop crying) this is so heartwrenching. I can't stand it. I'm a mega H/Hr shipper and this has reduced me to tears. BIG TIME. I know this is just a one shot, but i'd love to see a second one. Maybe from Harry's POV where HE is secretly in love with Hermione, but is afraid to tell her for fear of there friendship. I'd love to see that.

Great story though, Really sad.