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That was very good, and a suprise to see Hermione as a DE. I can only imagine what Ron would have said if he and Hermy got married, and he saw her Mark. I hope you write more chapters, I'd love to see this story develop.

Listen-you've really got something going here. It's well, written, and the plot really has potential. There are times, however, that it feels like things are being rushed, like Hermione's feeling for Draco. His own feelings can be explained somewhat by the life sized picture, but so far you've only skimmed the surface. Take your time, explore the deeper issues involved here. He's a Death Eater, just been cursed blind. The average person might be feeling bitter, or scared, or anything like that. She's been forced to be a Death Eater (which, in a way, deserves explaination in itself, given their policies on Kill Any Mudblood in Sight), and I would imagine she would be planning her escape as soon as possible. Again, this fic has great potential. It doesn't have to be super long, but I urge you to take your time with it, and go over it once again before you post.

Looking forward,
Avari20

Great job! I thought this might set up for a one-shot, but please to read that it hints at scenes to come. Love the thought of rejected Ron as Hermione gets seduced by Draco. Loved the portrait in his room.

Wow you did it again! You have to develop this wonderful story. I can