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Why don't you have a beta? Just joking. Please update as soon as you can. I have really enjoyed your stories.

I understand about the beta thing I got dogged by so many for not having a beta for both of my stories Forsake all others and Escape to
Love. they are cool. But as you say they take a while but I deal and just keep working on future chapters. Your stories are awesome without a beta keep up the amazing work.

Well, if all else fails at least they have Snape, right? Again, another great story. I really enjoy the pairing of Draco and Hermione, which is how I discovered fan fiction in the first place, and because of you I think I may ship Lucius and Hermione too! Your first outting with Draco and Hermione is commendable. He is not as saucy as his father, but it is a refreshing change. I love the part about her photo turning around when he was nude in front of her -- I wonder what it will do now? Also did he have it in his room at the manor or was this something that Snape prepared and hid for him? Again, love it -- you are so talented!

Wormtail has a secert crush on Voldemortde and sleeps with them at night.I hope Harry& Ron don't hitt Draco ,you just don't hitt a blind man!I love Severus,maybe Hermione should just have Draco&Severus at the same time.I think Cissy still wants to be in Dracos life,she just has to fo along with what Lucios says.I think later she will make a stand on her own and be with her son. Can't wait for more!

*throwing Lemon drops and Chocolate frogs at authour to help feed muse*
all twisty there in this chappie, Snape seems "good" and Narcissa may end up as a "nice" mum-in-law? Lucius is still a nasty piece of work though!

I love that Lucius stayed true to his character instead of quickly accepting Hermione. I like the idea of Draco having to do for himself for the first time. Also his mother could come around and maybe convince Lucius to accept Draco back. She at least looked like she cared.
Harry and company are going to kill Severus and Hermione for bringing Draco to headquarters. Especially Ron, when he finds out his Hermione loves Draco and gave herself to him. I can

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Bella
either we have the same "fibro brain" or my sjogren's is filling in the blanks b/c i haven't ever noticed anything missing. i am addicted to your works and especially loved your your tone when writing. please keep up the stress relief. your stories get me ready to face my PT job in spite of my grocery list of issues, which i KNOW you can identify with.

thanks again for keeping up the great work for those of up without the muse.

white dragon

yes, it was lovely, could have been more detailed, but good none the less. i like how this has a bit of a plot but its still mostly moments w/ just the 2 of them; u can communicate more than u think in a story that spans only a few short days. y' did extremely well 4 sum1 experimenting w/ a new pairing. -much love- ^___^v

** THIS IS NOT A FLAME ** You've an interesting plot that needs more development and editing. I really think you need to find a beta. When you put more effort, trust me it shows! The sex scene leaves a lot to be desired. Considering that Malfoy was supposedly in love with her for years, I would think that there would be more tenderness and passion from him. I also don't feel Hermione's capitulation felt genuine. Again, a bit too rushed. Keep writing because practice really does make perfect.