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for The Heat That Sears

by Samaelthekind

schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved Snape at the end. That was too awesome. "Creatively" indeed. :D The breakfast scene was very sweet, and I'm glad for Snape's involvement in this now. I hope that Flint gets what he deserves from Severus, whom I'm guess will be dealing out the appropriate punishment. Wonderful job.
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i've noticed something that in so many fanfics Draco loves eclaires...mayhap its just the thought of him eating them. Poor Harry but at least we know how much he really loves draco. that even if he can't keep him he is willing to use the debt to help him. even when he doesnt want to be helped. i really can't wait for the development.
person RabidSqurl
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The poor babies! *wants to huggle both the wee Draco and Harry, even though they're not wee at all* XD
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL!
person roxierose13
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gah! ok, gotta do this quick, love it! hate snape, even tho he did admit to being wrong... still think Harry is an idiot and love Draco more than ever. My poor, poor Draco :( Maintain your dignity, sweetie! anyway... yeah, ill read the next part later. now, its off to work because im almost late! :D
person Kayo
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! I have been waiting for an update since the last one. Fantastic continuation! I especially liked how Draco is not like automatically better because Harry came and talked to him (ah, fics like that annoy me some) but he wavers back and forth. And I like how Snape automatically assumed the worst but was willing to admit he was wrong, and that Harry really does value Draco's well-being over their friendship because it shows he really does care. So yes, the ninth in the series has not disappointed me...the story/characters/writing is as wonderful as ever.

Your welcome for the review, but I have to thank you too for the response. I like to encourage the authors I like, so it's a pleasure for me. I really can't wait to see how everything is resolved--I like how you don't rush into a climax, too. And I like the onion effect with Draco and Harry. It's a more suspenseful and insightful build-up. I think it's great you started out as a poet, certain elements really do shine through in your work. ;D GREAT JOB! DONT /EVER/ STOP WRITING!!!!! I think I might cry.
person Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!!!!!

EVIL!!! EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!

Draco!!!!!!!!

*massive glomp*

So what DID happen with Flint? To what extent?

WAY TO GO HARRY!!! Letting Snape have it...

And? AND??? NEXT??????????

XD
person madnesswithinme
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i just LOVE this series sooooo much! please keep up the good work! your writing is so fluid and smooth, its amazing!
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KOOL! Can't wait for number 10!