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for Smokin' Hot

by roxierose13

person Kat
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Please don't tell me that it is over.
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far! It's fantastic, and the interactions between the characters are great!!! I especially like what is going on between Blaze, Draco and Harry. I hope there
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am SO happy that you've made this a multi-chaptered fic! (btw I used to be the Ultimate Otaku; might've reviewed this story's chapter 1 before).

I LOVE that you've put Blaise in the story; I love pairings involving Blaise, Draco, or Harry, and all three in one fic...yum! I'm so excited.

I don't read AU fics a lot but you've done an excellent job at making this one interesting. I love how some of the little things come through here, the little personality things. And how the Malfoys Mrs and Mr are bugged by their son, lol. Eva is an interesting character, and I'm curious who was asking about Harry from Smeltings.

Nice scene between Blaise and Draco...;D :p mmm.

I still say the Harry/Draco stuff in chapter 1 was yummiest though.

Loving this fic so far, will keep reading. :D
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I just had to review one more time to say about chapter "At the Manor"...Blaise's cellphone ring cracks me up!! XD That is so f***ing funny. Love it, love it.

schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing chapter "The Agreement."

I LOVE everyone's cellphone rings! You fit them to the personalities and that makes it so much more interesting than just a regular cellphone ring. Haha, Harry's ring has Superman in it, that is great, so him, with his whole "Save the world" complex in Canon.

Gah, love this.

I love Blaise and Draco's relationship. And oh, I had a feeling I knew who Eva was realted to! Chuckle, chuckle. Oh how sly. I hope Harry doesn't get heartbroken though.

oh! My favorite part of chapter "Passing Notes" was this:

quote:

"Harry
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this fic is so smoking! Yeaahh!

I'm reviewing chapter "English class" here (sorry if I got the chapter name wrong). I love how you paired Harry and Draco together, and just oh...Draco. Just the way he is, is so lovely. He makes me laugh.

I love Harry's groggily answering the phone in the previous chapter. And the poem you assigned them was interesting. Draco's interesting in his grades - excellent. I like that detail. He is immaculate in many ways; elegant. And with his parents, sheesh, he should care about his grades.

This is by far the best AU I've ever read. :D

Oh, and I love that Lupin is the English teacher! And how it's cancer instead of werewolf-ness. Interesting. CHanging thingslike this in an AU is interesting. And yet you didn't change things too much, and people aren't OOC. Yay!
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In Chapter 9, "Shopping Excursion," I love when Draco comes to the door all swankied up, and Uncle Vernon goes all purple, and Draco's innuendo "I'll take very good care of him."

Harry's bafflement at the shopping is hilarious, too. And the sex in the public place...yummers. Exciting. Nice twist.

I'm so sad that I'm going to be reading the last chapter of this fic soon. :( I've enjoyed it so much!
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, when is Draco going to fall for Harry?
When he hurts Harry's feelings, kick him away, and betray him?
person misslala
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, seriously love to hate Draco in this!!! hahaha Why is he scheming on Harry, anyway? What did harry do to him other than step into the bathroom on the "wrong day" hahaa This is brilliant, hon. I shall have to visit your fics more often! :)
person Tryst
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
10 - I looove this story SO much! I hope you update faster this time. Although, no rush I'm just a little excited to see what happens next. Well, VERY excited. Love this story.