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for Smokin' Hot

by roxierose13

person Chrissy
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how this chapter came out, this story is great, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!
person tes-chan
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww can't wait for the next one.
person Roozette
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU FIXED THEM!!!!! *blows kisses*

*ponders*

*winks lasciviously*

I LOVED it! The interaction, the poem (gray eyed people... how fitting!) the KISS. Oh my oh my! This story is incredible!!!

Kisses!
Roo
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this latest chapter. that poem ws so tender. only one more chapter! *cries*
person alma
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Draco's finally a one man...man! *snickers* Good chapter.
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sigh.. that chapter.. was.. beautiful.. *cries* lol that was so sweet and tender =/
person bflatgirl
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh this was amazing!!! I dont usually read adultfanfiction but my friend sent me this link and i was glued from start to finish! And since i dont use it, i didnt realise that it was a multi-chaptered fic!! I cant WAIT to read the rest, the first chapter (which i thought was just an AMAZING oneshot) was, as i said, amazing, and ill waste no time in readin the rest!!! hehe i love it!!! You wrote it brilliantly!!!

Helen xxx
person Rice-Ball247
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O

...

one more chapter left...?

WAAAHH. you know, this is the first review I've ever written on AFF.N. I've never been motivated to before, but seriously, your fic absolutely rocks and it has that right amount of hotness with a toss of angst.

loving it so far! please update that last chapter soon!
person psychren
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ! That was so cute !
Can't wait till next chapter !
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so FREAKIN CUTE!
omg
<3