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for Smokin' Hot

by roxierose13

person Kayo
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! This was hot! I don't suppose we get a sequel? Pretty please? ;D Loved it.
person Alexis
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg..that was so hot O_O. I loved it!
person alyxanderson
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot damn. that well wow, man now i'm supposed to do homework? oh you cruel cruel girl!
person anon
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was funny ^_^
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha! That was a nice, smutty, little ficlet. It was kinda awkward how Harry was just standing there, staring at Draco while he smoked. But you do have strange taste. *grins* You need to edit it for mistakes but other than that you did a good job! I'm looking forward to the sequel. Heheheh!

~Kyle
person yoblosssom
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*warm fuzzles* I usually don't like non-magic fics, but this was pretty good. Nice job. ^_^ *five stars*
person innerchild
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
definietely not too much to ask for, especially with how good that was.

-inc
person Roy
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i was just pressing the button like you said and now i don't really know what to say...i'm not very good at this...but YOU are definitely good at writing lemons!!! i loved all of it!!! the best bedtime story i've ever read - that's for sure! so...good night and let's hope for your dreams to be inspiring! greets, roy
person Samayel
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You never fail to please :-) The title was quite accurate! Smoking in the boy's room sounds naughtier than ever...and I liked it.

Thanks for putting that one up! Samayel
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story was indeed 'smokin' hot' LOL. I read some of your other work and I just love it. Thank you for sharing this.