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for Smokin' Hot

by roxierose13

schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! a new chapter^^ I do love the story although I can't see where is it going, not that I care much right now, just enjoying each chappie. can't wait to read the next one
person Jessi
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I can't wait to read more.
person Sarah
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I can't wait till the next installment. :D I'm VERY glad you decided to continue with it! XD
person graballz
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*GASP* Oh, wow, I never thought a Muggle Harry/Draco fic could be THIS HOTTT!! WOW Although, I must frown on Draco being quite the chain smoker...I KNOW!! Since it's more or less obvious that Harry's in love with him, Draco should find himself falling for Harry, and then Harry helps him quit! hahahahaahahaha Keep writing the HOTT goodness!
person The Ultimate Otaku
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is HOT! SMOKIN' hot! Oh god. I loove it! I usually despise AU fics, but this is amazing! Draco is terribly sexy. Blaise's momentary appearance is piquing my curiousity. Harry's flustered love and schoolgirl shyness is adorable. MMm. Delicious fic. I will continue reading. I hope this brings Blaise into the equation.

Draco would smoke, wouldn't he? *rolls eyes* Fabulous characterization. Nice hot bathroom scene.
person The Ultimate Otaku
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, LOVE it! THANK YOU for bringing Blaise into the picture! And I love the bit with Eva. Very intriguing. I wonder who it IS that likes Harry? Hmmm. I'm curious but at the same time, man! Why couldn't there be a Harry/Blaise/Draco threesome? They're just so lovely, the three of them. Maybe they'll work it out.

Of course Ginny would have a crush on harry even though he's gay. *rolls eyes* this is the "ginny is silly" stage, even though Harry is in year 6.

OOH, are you going to make the boy be Tom Riddle?! THAT would be interesting. hmmm. Oh, and thanks for putting Hagrid in. That was a neat twist, with the pet store and everything. this is an excellent AU! You're incorporating everything/everyone, and keeping the personalities In Character. I love it.
person Strawberry_j
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww.. Draco is so heartless, poor Harry.. *hugs him* I'm curious about Eva's friend. Update soon, please?

~SJ~
person Althea
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story. Though I'm not too fond of Harry being so na
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
But this Eva and the person she got infos about Harry... well i don't like it! ;P
I hope no one is going to be in between Harry and Draco! Can't wait to read and find out!
Update soon!
person Kade
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was good...Great fic...