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person smmz79
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok so i first have to say i am sorry that i have not reviewed yet i got so stuck on reading this fic that i just went from one chap to another and got to the end and realized that i had yet to review... this was a great fic... i absolutely loved the verbal sparring wars between lucius and hermione they were very interesting and funny.... i like that you wrote them both kicking and screaming into this relationship... great job and i loved severus as well he was quite snarky, i love that he was dancing around giving lucius the answer he wanted about his balls shrinking and making him sweat.... great fic...
person Liz
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw! A new baby...and I love the name Alexander... (it exudes superiority)... It's cute how cats are attracted to babies (for the warmth,I suppose).Ours used to love my hubby's nephew (as long as he didn't try to pick her up by the ears!)... You really have a marvellous insight into Lucius...
person Liz
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The poor girl would give birth to an army if it was up to Lucius...funny how he's always the innocent party...
*snigger*
person Liz
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a most enjoyable tale...thank you for all your hard work! Now...which one of yours shall I read next?
person Liz
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Harry and Severus didn't turn out to be bad... Poor Snape,though...stuck in a house full of females... Just a random thought...if a Malfoy had a child with a Weasley ehose genes would be more prominent...? Thanks again for a fun ride...
person Liz
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just knew he'd come out of his funk/tantrum...hehehehe Men are so predictable...I love the slow build-up in this fic...for me that's the whole point of reading...
person Liz
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well,let's face it...Harry would only know about multiple orgasms if they took place in a Quidditch match...
person Liz
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lucius and his amazing shrinking balls...a circus act? Couldn't bring the wife and kiddies to see that...Don't mind the way my thoughts wander,plrase... *giggle*
person Liz
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooops! Toddler tantrum... It's a bit like watching a tennis match...if I was in the same room I'd have severe neck pain...
person Liz
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are you keeping score here? I'd say it was about a draw actually... Pity she never thought to wear high heels with the raincoat... Still,she *is* only a novice...