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person Berkid42
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just read this all in one go- Well written and I really enjoyed it! I'm reading Taming Of The Shrew- Wizard Style right now too, and I decided to check out what else you had under your belt (no pun intended...). Keep up the fantastic work :)
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are a master writer. Great story, by the way. I loved the epilogue - you've tied it up nice with a bow to match. Bravo!
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter
person koko
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story..
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story.
It was one story about HG/LM that I really liked and trully enjoyed.
I've read some of your other stories and those are great as well!!

WS
person liz
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i have got to stop. this is ridiculous! I have now finished the third story of yours in as many days. I have to slow down, but the stories are so good, each one gets better and better this one is no exception! must resist starting another...maybe just one chapter wont hurt...
person Anon
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love that lucius went from a completely dominant and half-mad about the marriage to a great loving family man who is stil kinda dominant but also love his wife and lets her take the reighns every once in a while.

oh yea the eight kids thing- i dont think lucius would surive. 8-(
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Really well told and fun. Enjoyed the progression of the relationship.
person Tara_Kaho
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just wrote you my longest review ever I think... And it got erased... Darn. Now I get to start over and see if I can remember it... Sorry if I can't!
I really liked this fanfiction of yours! And can't wait to read more! ^_^ There weren't even any parts that I waited to scream, "WHY?" about. And that is always a good sign.
At one point I thought Hermione was a little harsh when she was angry with Harry but then I thought about who she had been living with and some other little things. It made a lot more sense when I thought about it that way.
Lucius was very believeable to me. I could see him freaking out about the end of his bloodline being 'pure'.
I also really enjoyed that Lucius is trying to have more children then Arthur. Really made me laugh consider how close he is! But if I was Hermione I would have already barred him from the bedroom. Or atleast done something so I couldn't have any more kids for a while.
Thanks so much for writing and sharing! Love this fanficiton! And I think I pretty much remembered everything... And added a little more though not much! ^_^

Tara
person mageemi
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Have just been going back and re-reading some of my fave stories and wanted to leave a quick comment as I don't think I left a review the first time through. I really love all of your stories, but for some reason I especially love your portrayal of LM/HG as a couple. I love the banter between them and the way you develop their relationship. And I love my happy endings so you make me a "happy camper." Thank you :)