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person MollysSister
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to the results of Hermione's research into becoming a SIREN! She is going to knock his socks off and then some. I hope! I wonder if Hermione will come up with anything that Lucius doesnt already know about?? Isnt he supposed to be educating her? Oh the fun!
person ShilohDarke
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Delicious chapter! I love how Lucius stays very in character in this one. He can be so nice and sensitive in one aspect, but a royal git when you let your guard down! Hermione deserved that one... Loved it! Hope to see another chapter soon. I am planning on updating Mirror tonight if I can, so keep yopur fingers crossed, and I will do the same for the next chapter of this story as well.

Shiloh
person Anathema
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooo weeeeeeeee! *fans self* Is it gettin' hot in here or is it just me? ^__-



Update again soon! I love this story!
person xVampyrx
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Mondieu! J'adore beaucoup! I am in awe with the amazingness of this story. I LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE! VERY PROFESSIONAL. I couldn't stop reading! I gave all 14 chapters a read in one go. Oh Wow. GODDESS' WOW. There was one part where Ginny knew the basics of Malfoy sexual history and that would have been a good lead in to an affair she might have had before wedlock. hahaha, seeing that in the begining, Lucius mentions how he much rather have a weasley instead of Hermione.lol. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE, I'm writhing in antcipation to see what Lucius has in store for Hermione, though I have a vivid taste of what. A mon avis, c'est vraiment parfait! Continue s'il vous plait!!!=]
person Bella Snape
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! I am so pleased that you are going to get them pregnant. I really hope they do fall in love all though the tension between them at the moment is excellent!
person Scarlet
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEllo!

you asked for a review so here it is!

i really like this hermione/lucius pairing. its not too lovey dovey which is just gross and best of all they are all pretty much in character.

soooo keep going and i will keep reading!

kind regards,

Scarlet x
person moxie
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, Hermione is good. She really knows how to manipulate a man. Excellent! Can't wait to see what new tricks Lucius has in store for her!
person Lupins Lady
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, its getting so good. I love the Lucius/Hermione stories. He's such a bad boy. Also, your writing is awesome. The story is easy to read and follow and it flows nicely. Great Job. Can't wait for another post.
person LadyAnocsona
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you how much I love your story. I have been looking for a good Lucius/Hermoine story for quite some time, and have been disappointed. Thank you for writing such a good story. I look forward to reading this to its end. Thank you again. Keep up the good work

LadyAnocsona
person Ladytalon
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He might have the smallest balls in England if he kept drinking that potion

lol!!!! I wonder how Hermione will react to having to swallow her "potion"...