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person MollysSister
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOO HOO it finally occurs to Hermoine that she could pounce on Lucius whenever she wants. I hope there will be pouncing next! Many thanks to you for your quick updates. You put a smile on this reader's face for sure.
person PAMELA WILLIAMS
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
person ccrawley
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cannot wait to see what the siren has instore for Lucius. I certainly hope that it is painful.
person Queen
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far I hope you update soon. :)
person angel
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter .. i hope mione does what do that it will show him ..please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for more

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person LVanna
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a quickie! Would love to see longer chapters, especially these wonderful Lucius lemons. I would venture to say the FemDom part will be coming to play soon. hehehe poor Lucius.
person Bella Snape
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was rough. I thought he was starting to get along with her now? Oh well... please have her being pregnant!
person Ladytalon
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bwahaha, she really had it 'coming' to her, did she? lol. Although I had a question...did you mean him to hold her mouth open with both hands? Usually a man needs one hand on his 'wand' to maintain the friction necessary when he's experiencing an orgasm - either that or he would have had to shove himself pretty far down her throat. That made me wonder a bit, is all, but I really liked this chapter :)
person moxie
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no - Lucius better watch out. I can't believe he did that to her, and with no warning either. That is just...wrong. I can't wait to see how she becomes a siren!
person Sampdoria
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really do like your story, I prefer SS/HG stories, but you sure make me want to read more of this story:-)