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person purrfus
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Lovely interludes between the married people. I can have a good time as is. However, because enquiring minds want to know - was there logic behind the enforced marriage, what was Harry thinking, was he just that mad at Mione or did he hear a prophecy?
person Shilohdarke
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooh! I loved it! Spanking??? Oh and he's willing to let her spank him? Damn!!! I want to take a round or two at that awesome pale hiny!!! And I can't wait for what is going to happen tonight... Loved it! Please update soon!

Shiloh
person LaBibliographe
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A reply to purrfus' question. The question deals with what has gone before in the story, not what will happen in the future, so I'm willing to answer with my take on it. Harry wasn't trying to be mean to Hermione, or ruin her life. He needed someone to control the person he saw as the major threat left against the Light. He has taken on the management of the whole wizarding world as his job. He asked her to take on crushing the only real threat left by marrying Lucius. She hated being asked to do it and having Harry put the job onto her. But Harry trusted her more than anyone else in their world to accomplish that task. And she knows it under all her resentment.

That's the backstory in my head. Apologies if the prologues weren't clear enough. I hope this helps.
person C_Dog
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, I think that this pairing is severely underappreciated. Fire and ice just seem to go so well together, don't they? As for the story, beautifully written and wonderfully thought out. It's quickly becoming my new clandestine fetish. Thank you for letting me read your work; I can't wait to read more!
C_Dog
person Ladytalon
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
person Anon
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please tell that they start to have actual feelings for each other other than sexual lust. I really like the story though!!! Please update soon!!!!
person angel
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah lucius is off the potion now ... hmm i hope mione plan works ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better and better, I love the camaraderie that you have between Snape and Lucius! I also want Hermione to fight another woman to protect her man!!!

And can't wait until the sirens unleashed!
person moxie
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An amusing new chapter. I look forward to what Hermione comes up with. And it was so cute having Lucius daydream about Hermione fighting over him!
person ShilohDarke
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved Snape's comment about side effects of the potion! That was just too cute! Also, Lucius is going to have a few surprises in store for him, isn't he? I can't wait to see what some of them are and how she's going to go about it... LOL! LOVE IT! Looking forward to more!

Shiloh