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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'll give you credit for updating! I think this chapter may have been a little short, but it is necessary to get to the next pivital part of the story! You did a good job! It makes me that much more interested in what's going to happen next...
BONDAGE??? And Hermione letting herself get spanked? Hmmm... I know she is a brave soul! It won't take her long to decide to take the leap and learn yet another new thing... that could be highly pleasureable!
More! Soon please? Shiloh
BONDAGE??? And Hermione letting herself get spanked? Hmmm... I know she is a brave soul! It won't take her long to decide to take the leap and learn yet another new thing... that could be highly pleasureable!
More! Soon please? Shiloh
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 18 - ooh, happy couple at last! Hmm, but how will Hermione like it when it's her turn, and must she wait until she truly deserves real punishment? Heh-heh! Thanks for the new chapter.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!
Can you tell that I love it?!?!? I think that Lucius giving her a kiss at the end was sweet... is he falling for her do you think?
Can you tell that I love it?!?!? I think that Lucius giving her a kiss at the end was sweet... is he falling for her do you think?
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... What do I think??? That was a very intriguing chapter! I was proud of Hermione for knowing exactly what it was Lucius needed. I loved thereaction he gave her to her new nightie and I only have one main concern...
MORE!!! When can I have MORE??? As I am sure Lucius will wake up wondering!
LOL, Excellent chapter, luv! Truly, I am looking forward to the next chapter!
Shiloh
MORE!!! When can I have MORE??? As I am sure Lucius will wake up wondering!
LOL, Excellent chapter, luv! Truly, I am looking forward to the next chapter!
Shiloh
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*fainting dead away*
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, looks like they both got what they wanted. Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is a great story! Even though I love Lucius, I would strangle Harry if I was Hermione. But they may as well have some fun together, right? I'm having a little trouble believing Lucius would submit to a woman, even in play, but it was still very hot! And Hermione is a great mistress. I hope for more lemons soon!
And as for any future children; I think/hope Lucius' Malfoy-pride will be stronger than his pureblood-pride; after all, their children will be Malfoys even if they're not pureblood.
Loved it. Thanx!
And as for any future children; I think/hope Lucius' Malfoy-pride will be stronger than his pureblood-pride; after all, their children will be Malfoys even if they're not pureblood.
Loved it. Thanx!
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Snakelette said, "I'm having a little trouble believing Lucius would submit to a woman, even in play,..."
Do you think he submitted to her? Really submitted? Or was she serving his purpose just as he wanted? Who orchestrated the whole evening's entertainment? Hermione certainly added unexpected frills and she's no one's pushover. But she's got a ways to go. I love Lucius - he's such a devil. The bigger their egos are, the harder they fall.
Do you think he submitted to her? Really submitted? Or was she serving his purpose just as he wanted? Who orchestrated the whole evening's entertainment? Hermione certainly added unexpected frills and she's no one's pushover. But she's got a ways to go. I love Lucius - he's such a devil. The bigger their egos are, the harder they fall.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want to kidnap you, tie you up and make you write for me forever. I *loved* this chapter. It was so, SO good. I LOVED the spanking. I usually don't like Dom!Hermione but you've written her excellently here. And Lucius was so yummy here. Loved the little goodnight kiss at the end (awh).
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*fans wildly* That was sooooooooooo hot. Oh, my.
I like to read as well as write Submissive!Lucius but I've never been able to imagine him being spanked, let alone write it...excellent job, m'dear. Wow. I was planning on having Hermione torment Lucy/Lucius over in Creampuff ever since I first thought of the story idea but I don't know now...how can I top that? ;) I think I need to read it again.
I like to read as well as write Submissive!Lucius but I've never been able to imagine him being spanked, let alone write it...excellent job, m'dear. Wow. I was planning on having Hermione torment Lucy/Lucius over in Creampuff ever since I first thought of the story idea but I don't know now...how can I top that? ;) I think I need to read it again.