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person Citten
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay my first review for this story and sorry it wasn't earlier but i wanted to catch up with the rest of the readers. Great story i truely love it with its nateral progression and the way humans will grow towards each other when force into that kind of a situation. i can't wait to see what else will happen at this dance. boy men really are stupid sometimes when it comes to dealing with women. and just so you know you can and should make this story as long as possible!!!:) PLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!
person JW
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 20 - yikes, please tell me Severus won't have idjit children with the bimbo. And how does Hermione know those hickeys on bimbo's neck are from Severus?? Grrrr... bimbos... BTW, did anyone else "react" to Hermione's dress? Thanks for piccy!
person *DB*
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@20 lol awesome chapter. update soon
person moxie
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting.
person ccrawley
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
She went too easy on him. Enjoying the story.
person Ladytalon
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:D Lucius thinks he's so sneaky...but Hermione knows his game! lol. Oh, and you can go ahead and put http:// in links - for some reason, it never turns into a hotlink here.
person moxie
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah, our Hermione's a quick one ain't she? thank you for the update - can't wait for more!
person moxie
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And I've been thinking...I think Lucius should learn the lesson of jealously as well. Methinks she is introduced to a handsome, YOUNG half-blood who finds her terribly charming and especially alluring in her siren dress and asks her to dance. All while Lucius watches from afar. No? Yes? Maybe? Please?
person ShilohDarke
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I love the way Lucius responded to her scanty little dress! I love the way Hermione responded to the way Pamela was acting and her husbands info about the situation... Good for her for not punching the idiot! That would probably have just made the little scamp want him more! I love the way she put Lucius in his place afterwards. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Which means... (foot taps) I'm waiting....

:-) Please update soon!
Shiloh
person PAMELA WILLIAMS
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.