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person moxie
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah! sweetness. I love, LOVE, love this story and was obsessing over it all weekend. Does Lucius finally agree that Hermione does "own" him?? I loved his sweet, little thought at the very end about them both receiving gifts. *sigh* AND what a HOT scene! Yay! I finally get my Dom!Lucius scene - and with spanking. yay! Can't wait for more!
person Snakelette
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the delicious lemons. Not wearing any underwear is certainly handy! Love the fact that they are both getting jealous and possessive; they are getting more into eachother.

And about Harry. I'm sorry, but forcing a friend into a loveless marriage has nothing to do with still having a lot to learn about women. Male or female friend, you just dont do that to someone you care about! (no matter how hot Lucius is ;P ) So I'd rather stay very angry at Harry, if you don't mind ^^.
person happyreader
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is getting better and better thanks for your time
person Ladytalon
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter - at first I wasn't that into the spanking (I liked when Luscious Lucius got paddled, though *lol*) but I forgot about it when you got into the lemons. The bedpan comment made me laugh and my husband ask what was so funny :D Still can't stand Harry, though - sorry. I don't care how much work he has to do, he's being a complete tit.
person Shilohdarke
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter! I love Lucius' jealousy and Hermione's spanking for it... I loved everything about the sex scene. I am definately looking forward to more. You're going to update soon, correct?

Also, I got your e-mail. I am glad you responded as well. I enjoy your stories and when a fellow writer takes the time to comment on mine, I feel it only polite to take the time to answer! You are a fantastic writer and I enjoy your imagination very much! I look forward to reading more.

Shiloh
person angel
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ he will ever say he is jealous but we all now he was .. man the was awesome ...please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon ... later for now

angel
person xVampyrx
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's been almost 3 days since your last chapter, I'm dying dying dying. I'm like a crack addict without the crack, and and it's like, making me hyperventilate... but I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER,LOVE! I'm on pins and neeeeeedles! Teehee I'm so excited! I've never been this excited about anything before!=]
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story, wonderful lemons. i guess that about sums up what i want to say for now.
person Scarlet
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
harry is a bit of an arse in this fic isnt he!

Chapter: Harry

i like it! (evil laugh)

hermione gets multiple orgasms and harry only gets one.

Lucius *drools*

i forgot my point....

please keep writing! cause i will keep reading ;)
person shiv5468
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor Harry. Not. He deserved that. And more

More soon please.