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person angel
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.... damn that was awesome ilove it ... hmm what happen to stop it all ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person *DB*
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@22 awesome chpater. loved it..i really don't like harry in this story, hes...self absorbed...kinda...anyways, loved the chapter and can't wait for the next update
person Citten
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the update and i do hope that another chapter is in store soon, very soon! i loved the garden escape with the two of them and well need i say more. harry really is stupid is all i have to say except that i think she expressed the feelings rather well and i would have done the same. :)
person moxie
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In hindsight, I do have to say that I wish we heard a bit more from Hermione as to what it felt like to be spanked and dominated in such a way. This was, afterall, her first time taking "her turn". Lucius' spanking scene was so visceral - ytou really described what it felt like to for and for her. But this scene lacked that a bit. It would be nice to have some follow-up thoughts from our two characters.
person gracie
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...this chapter was fantastic!! i can't wait to read more so please post again soon...thanks!!
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
he he! I like it, they are so in love and neither are prepared to admit it!!!!

I really would like her to be pregnant though... pwetty pwease?
person Sampdoria
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I truly enjoy your story. It is both romantic (even though Lucius and Hermione dosen't know it yet)and humourous. I am looking forward to the next chapter:-))
person DarkLady
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was great! I love abit of against the wall Smut and Lucius does it so well!!! :) Can't wait for an update!
person Elvra
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, I love this story. I think I love it more than others because you update so much. I've only recently gotten into L/Hr, and I absolutely adore this story.

Update soon!
Elvra

PS: Happy 5th.
person PAMELA WILLIAMS
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great post, please post again soon. Thanks.