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Ch 26 - I'm glad she didn't blast him. While his anti-Mudblood views were always wrong, he is trying to change now, and it takes a while to undo generations of such teaching. One cannot change a mindset in just a few hours, even with magic. She should give him another couple hours (snerk!). BTW, loved the lines about "you make an excellent sex toy" and "blond bimbo."

Great post, love this story, please post again soon. Thanks.

I was thinking...if Lucius were really that depressed it would take longer than two weeks or even just a few weeks for him to get out of it. And the way in which you write, it seems like a lot more time has passed. It would make more sense if more time passed - like a few months. My two cents.

To Moxie re depression -

You are correct about the length of time it would normally take for a moderate case of depression to subside. I was faced with either being true to medical science or shortening the amount of time when Lucius and Hermione weren't together. I foreshortened the time element for the depression so Lucius could interact with Hermione sooner. Having Hermione and Lucius go for several months apart, or having Lucius incapacitated for months would have dragged my story line down. So maybe the reader can employ the time-honored fanwank (as I did) and go with the idea that magic folk are different, or that magic medicine is more effective than Muggle medicine. Will that serve?

that was a GREAT chapter! i do so love what draco did it was really smart, besides it got lucius thinking. now things will start working out, right? (just so you know that the ending of that last sentence was slightly histarical.) update soon!

Wow! What a beautiful story this has turned out to be.
Thanks!

Some answers:

For JW a picture of a flail, although I probably should have used the term cat o' nine tails.

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For Philosopher - you are correct. And Chapter three it is. To quote Lucius, "You do realize that with these anklets on all Purebloods, I am not able to touch anyone else, even after you conceive. I

a GREAT chapter. Glad to see Lucius coming to terms with everything. And what a clever move from Draco.

go draco you new just what to do to help him out ... so is lucius still wearing his gift from mione ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

Yes Lucius you prat! You need to talk to Hermione and tell her you love her you imbecile...

THREE CHEERS FOR DRACO!

I'm glad someone knocked some sense into the stubborn old fools head.

Hip Hip Hooray! Hip Hip Hooray! Hip Hip Hooray!

Give Draco a medal.

Ah, and that baby scene was so cute.