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person Bella Snape
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this is going.

And will Lucius admit he loves her already! Thats all she wants to hear!

YAY Draco!!! (I hardly ever say that...)
person Ladytalon
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a little excited and
person 99
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I just wanted to say, thanks so much for updating! It always amazes me how fast you write. I love your story!
person moxie
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaaaahhhh - what a sweet chapter! Lovely! It was so, so SWEET. I liked how they made up. really. and I love how they are slowly getting closer.
person Paris
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay...update soon.
person Bravmiki
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is rightly worried about the important things...himself of course! I do like that he asked about how Hermione was feeling (very sweet). Good to see him expanding his emotional bandwith. Hope they have many more "moments" :)))
person Citten
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
of course she will come out ahead (at least to some extent)! loved the chapter and deffentaly glad he is back to his old self, well to some extent. i just you would have put it into a little more detail. i hope you don't skip too much between the ending of this chapter and the next i just love this story too much! :)
person Snakelette
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and a very good talk; I loved the verbal sparring!

And you're right; cutting off his nuts would have been a bit harsh ^^ Showing his interest in the baby is a good start; more of that would be a plus!
person ShilohDarke
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Come out ahead in the long run? I thought she came out ahead already right here! Let's see... He's searched her out. He's told her he is okay with having the child with her? He showed concern for her health... and he admitted to wanting to shag her senseless! Hmmm... besides coming out with the fact taht he does truly LOVE her, what else does he need to do?

I love it! Perfect chapter! I want more soon! PLEASE?
person angel
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was great im glad they are talking again.... i love it and how he got her back in to this bed ..please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel