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my most favorite line, the line that made me laugh out loud and choak was "Lucius tried for virtuous, but overshot the innocent look, instead projecting shifty. " You are too funny!

Okay so you made the baby a boy instead of a girl. Im pouting but I'll forgive you this once. How does Lucius survive the recovery period from Alexander's birth?

"No Snitch in her Quidditch."

Hahahahahahahahahahaha
That was absolutely brilliant. I do really enjoy this story.

Not a review, but a story request, because I like the way you write Lucius.
Plot Bunny: Harry hits Lucius Malfoy with a magic destroying spell. That spell reveals two family secrets. 1) Lucius was born a girl, but his father wanted a male heir so he changed his daughter's gender. 2) Lucius is/was sterile. His only contribution to Draco was magic, not seed. Now, without Malfoy magic to sustain him, Draco is fading from existance.

This is only a request. I understand if you are too busy to add another story to your schedule. I like NEW ORDER, and I would not want it to suffer because of this plot bunny distraction.

Quick thot on NEW ORDER, I feel sorry for Harry. What was he thinking when he married off the most brilliant witch of her generation to the most powerful wizard of the previous generation? (Riddle and Dumbledore are both significantly older than Lucius. He has no competition in his own age group.)

Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.

How sweet! I love it! He admits his feelings so casually I'm sure she would almost have missed it if it were not Hermione we are talking about! I am glad she finally knows how he feels. I'm also thrilled that the baby has his fathers good looks, and that Lucius can't seem to get enough of him. Awesome chapter, and I am looking forward to more!

SD

I like seeing Lucius vulnerable. It's a nice change of pace.

love this fic! if there is more i cant wait. if that was nthe end then wonderful job!

First let me say:

"I think you know that the idea of Purebloods as sole magical people was a closely held wish of mine."

Snort-understatement of the century! I love it! hehe.

ROTFLMAO a Lucius and the 'totally innocent' comment. As if the man was ever innocent a day in his life.

And finally not to overuse an ahem euphemism but indeed the pen is mightier than the sword....and their battle of words is one of the funniest things I've read in a long time and the best part of the fic so far. Genius.

I rather hoped Hermione would find some more creative ways to punish him... with his consent of course. But this chapter was also great. I wonder when Hermiones pregnancy hormones will kick in. Right now she is almost saintly understanding and rational. I wonder how Lucius will deal if that changes.