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person *DB*
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@30. Hmm its sad that its come to an end. I loved the story and loved the ending!! Hope you continue writing stories!!
person ccrawley
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like the progression of Lucius's character and poor Hermione and all those little devils.
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I feel like that with some of the reviews I get... I wonder if they are reading my mind.

I am so pleased that this story had a very happy ending, although no mention of Snape and Pamela.. what happened to them? Never mind.. I kind of like the idea of Snape's son and Lucius daughter liking each other and getting married, but I suppose that's sticking to purity again.

Anyways, happy with the conclusion. Well done!!!
person Shetan
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed "A New Order of Wizards" very much....
person Snakelette
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a great ending to this wonderful story! Lucius going for eight kids *grin*

Thanx for sharing!
person Jade
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story
person LadyDarcy
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Applaudes*
That was a fantastic story.
I'm really glad that you focused the entire story on Lucius's and Hermione's relationship, rather than throwing in some sort of outside conflict, like a war in there. There aren't too many great stories that do what you have done, and its wonderful. I can't wait to see what you think of next!
person SERPENT'S QUEEN
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK, JUST A QUESTION THAT I CAN'T GET OUT OF MY MIND. WHAT HAPPENED WITH SEVERUS AND PAMELA? AND THEIR CHILD/CHILDREN? PLEASE ANSWER ME!!!!! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW!!!!

I LOVE YOUR STORY, PLEASE KEEP WRITTING!!!!!!
person J.S.
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You did a great job with this story. :) I'd like to see how you would tackle a Lucius/Harry story...or have you already written one?
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
From LaBibliographe

Due to queries about Snape and Pamela, I've added a short postscript. It is now Chapter 30. Finis!