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person Chavela
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18

It is hard to review since I am so sucked into each chapter, but I had to drop a line about how brilliant that was. I loved it! Very hot.
person Chavela
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22

Isn't it wonderful how that green eyed monster can make the truth come out so perfectly.
person Yuki
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAAAH! It was soooo good X3 I loved your style, and I will probably be checking out your other stories =D
person Chavela
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25

Draco came a step closer instead.
person Chavela
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27

Crooks gets his own crib is just too cute, and I love that Lucius has more than warmed up to his boy.
person Chavela
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ANOTHER BABY!!!!! YAY!
person Chavela
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT a WONDERFUL ending!!!! So perfetly sweet! So.... just well... PERFECT!

I hope you write more stories so I can read more from you!!!!
person Philosopher
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When I started this I was in lust with Lucius. I've ended it in love with him.

Well done you ;) And an i just say..I LOVE grown up, snarky, in love Hermione! lol

I adored the little tidbit about the flame haired Potters (I hope they have unruly hair and wear glasses too though in fairness hehe)..and am glad Snape ended up happy.

And did I mention I love Lucius? Oh yeah... :D I no there's no more story..but it doesn't stop me wanting one!
person Philosopher
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM

When I started this I was in lust with Lucius. I've ended it in love with him.

Well done you ;) And can I just say..I LOVE grown up, snarky, in love Hermione! lol

I adored the little tidbit about the flame haired Potters (I hope they have unruly hair and wear glasses too though in fairness hehe)..and am glad Snape ended up happy.

And did I mention I love Lucius? Oh yeah... :D I no there's know more story..but it doesn't stop me wanting one!
person ShilohDarke
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I need to cry now! I have enjoyed this story so very much, and I hate to see it end! I do love the way you made Lucius be able to handle his boys so well! And then, turning his attention to Hermione and massaging her feet (I wish my hubby was so thoughtful!)

Anyway, I loved it and I wait for your next LM/HG story with heated breath!

SD