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person marie_606
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ive probably enjoyed reading it as much as you have had writing it, one thing tough... a two headed girl? that caught me off guard i'll tell you that:P
person Mariah Thomas
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yey....!!!!!!! very good, can't wait for the next fanfiction that you will write, best of luck
person BuffyXO
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cannot express how much I loved your story. You avoid many of the cliches that daunt other stories and still remain cannon with your whole tale. I am sorry that I waited until the end to review, but I just discovered you tonight and two hours later, you now have a fan for life. I applaud your use of educated words and, again, the gumption to create rather than immulate the same tired tale of horrified!Hermione and lecerious!Lucius. Bravo on such a great job and I look forward to more HG/LM stories from you in the (hopefully near) future. -- Heather :)
person Annie
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great little post script
person Chavela
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Prologue!!!!

What an awesome start! I am already sucked into this. Now I move onto the other chapters. And what is great is that it is finished, so I will not have to torture myself waiting for more chapters. LOL!
person Chavela
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Second Prologue!

LOL! ON Hermione's thoughts. Poor Hermione. PLEASE! She gets that fine man as her husband. No pity, ENVY I tell ya'!!!! LOL!
person Chavela
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Three!

Oooh... Lucius is so nasty. Taking that potion on the sly, how clever of our very sexy Slytherin.
person Chavela
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Six

Well... now that was hot. Lucius, the sex god!!!! LOL!
person Chavela
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Seven

More hottness... but I wonder if Lucius is still going to take the potion? I guess I will find out.
person Chavela
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Seven

More hottness... but I wonder if Lucius is still going to take the potion? I guess I will find out.