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schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is making me kinda sad. I hope things improve between them.
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm not so sad now. Very interesting chappie. I liked it.
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hermione and her research. Sheesh. Well, at least it's fun research.
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I can't just pick one part of the story because it was all so good. This is why you are such a brilliant writer - you can combine a great story with luscious lemons so well. I am now totally in love with Lucius and Hermione as a couple - they are just so well matched.

I am really enjoying Prisoners of Love as well just now and I am just gonna start reading 'The Wedding' - I'll be sure to leave a review.
person Damiana
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot lemons, good plot, very good prose!

Thanks for writing.

I think that my favourite element was Lucius' relationship with Crookshanks...I guess that's a bit odd but there it is. It mirrored his relationship to Hermione in many ways and so served as a subtle foreshadowing of what was to come. Was that your intention?
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All right, Love. Where do I begin....love it, love you, love your obvious delight in Jason Isaacs and his oh so sweet self...dont blame you one little bit...I'll let you in on a secret, my hubby could be his little brother, black hair, big bright blue eyes same sly smile..yummy yummy!(My hubby was actually a part of the Battle of Mogidishu that Blackhawk down was based on, funny coincidence)

I want a Lucius action figure...one that comes with a paddle and purple vibrator (yes, I read the other stories too) Got me wondering if I could convince hubby to don a blonde wig and carry a cane.......
person Queen Meabh
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess I'm just reading all your old Lucius stories till you update Prisoners of Love - and this one even had a homebirth! (As someone who wants to be a midwife that had me excited.) And excellent characterization, as always. I loved it!
person Evie
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy all of your stories, and I can't wait to read the rest of this. xx
person luvhp
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOw, what a great story!
I didn't want to review after every single cpater as I pretty much used my whole 'work' day reading it :)

But from beginning to end it was absolutely perfect!
At first I couldn't believe Harry did that to Hermione, what kind of a friend throws her into the 'Snake-Pit' But it turned out best.
Their amorous sex play was so much fun to read and I especially liked how Hermione put Pamela in her place, and how Lucious 'reprimanded' her later, mm, yummy-goodness.
Too funny that Hermione found out about the potion. It was great.

8 KIDS! Merlin's beard I'd go nuts, I've got 3 girls and by Friday, NO MORE BABIES from hubby, woo-hoo!!

Off to check out more of your wonderful writing!
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review you left on my Captain Hook story, It was so well written that I simply had to come over and read some of your stories. Imagine my delight to discover that I had already read and enjoyed one of those stories. Actually, one of the few Malfoy stories I have ever read.

Now I am reading this one, and already, ( chapter 6) I am desperately in love with it. You write the most delightful Lucius! And you used the word 'vitriol', a favorite word of mine, and one sadly neglected in the literary world.

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