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I have to admit, I found this story unique and different and was completely impressed and eagerly looking forward to what would happen when Harry returned to Hogwards a different person. How he would deal with potentially former friends and enemies and the roles that would be expected of him. How both his classmates and teachers would react when they found that he shyed away from adults (with the exception of Snape, another factor that would shock everyone) and on the converse was foul mouthed, bad attituded and braizen around his fellow students. Also, how exactly would Harry be able to overcome his fear of adults when forced into a situation where he had to deal with Deatheaters and Voldemort. All of it was so engaging and I was really looking forward to how it would all turn out...

... then you made Harry a Half-Vampire Prince out of nowhere and gave him what would tantamount to probably special vampire powers or some such nonsense. What. The. Hell? What was the point of everything else? You had a brilliant and fresh idea, they spoiled it. You are an excellent writer and 'Death Dancer' was developing into an impressive story. Then it made a sharp turn left, head first into a wall.

I'm looking forward to the new chappie

Awwww, update some more, PPPPLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE? Its really great so far, I'm so into it, and I can't wait to find out what happens next! Hope you add more soon because your storys really original. It has me clueless to whats going to happen, and just dieing to know! Keep up the great work! -Manda

You seem to be missing chapter nine.

not sure if you noticed but chapter (8 or 9--the one with the conversation betw. harry and snape in the bathroom) was posted to your dark castle story- also i have greatly enjoyed reading your stories and look forward to the updates