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PUGFACE NEEDS TO DIE A SLOW AND TERRIBLE DEATH! And if you would be so kind I would love a sequal. I would religiously read it. I know im behind on reviewing college has been crazy lately. I dont mean to get into your personal business so I hope you take no offense to this, but you SATs are incredibly important, unless your going to spend your first two years at a community college or arent planning on going to college... But you have such great talent that I see not attending a higher education institution as a waste of talent. I love your writing and you seem passionate about it because of how diligent you are with your updates. Please, post soon, make a sequal and reconsider your SATS.

I don't know what to tell you about the whole sequel/no sequel issue but I still love this story and I want to see Hermione and Draco end up together with Hermione being pregnant.

Great story however you are creating so many plot lines that its starting to be a bit boring. PLease get onto the main stuff with Harry being betrayed. Hopefully there will be a happy twist to the end.

Pretty please update!

Very sexy. I like your Pansy; she's just badass in bed. Lmao. Oh, and Hermione and Davis should totally have a fuck scene. Not sex; just animalistic fucking sometime in the near future. It'd be totally hot. ;)

UPDATE!

Great story!!!! Can't wait to read more!

Hooooray for the new chapter! The smut scene was amazing! I didnt see the whole threesome thing coming at all, i also didnt see seamnus and dean going to get the mark! Another good chapter, its all comin toether.. and still again the smut scene was HOTTTT! haha anyways chick! thanks for keeping me entertained eith your brillitan writing!

Magzie

GGGAAAAAHHHH I loved it
That was a really detailed and really good chapter!!
I loved the hermione and pansy getting along in bed thing man that took me for a twist
hehe ok well I look forward to reading more

can't wait

much love
Strangerdanger89

I'm very sorry I'm not around enough to review every chapter, but I'm trying to get online when I can :)
Anyway I strangly enjoyed this chappie, I myself am usually not fond of femsmash, however this was skillfully written and I quite enjoyed it. Which shows that you are a versatile writer :D I can't wait to read more and I also like how you had a member from each house become a death eater :D
Update soon!
Love Natalie