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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The tension and anticipation were fantastic - then he ruined it by spouting romantic nonsense. Very OOC and cliche. Everything up to that point was fantastic, including his lesson to the class.
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, I always like the pairing of Hermione and Snape. I also got a kick out of Snape teaching esx ed, lol.
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I, Jupiter Victor, God of Rome, am pleased by this piece of work. I do like Snape/Hermione fics a lot, and this is one of the best short Snape/Hermione fics I've read in recent months. Well done ;)
Jupiter Victor
Jupiter Victor
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Simply lovely, Bella! I just wish it were a little longer to biuld up the anticipation!
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~wow that was great i love it .... i cant wait in till your next story .. later for now
angel
angel
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
Hugs,
Corazon
Hugs,
Corazon
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this one, it read like an outline for a very long series. I guess your stories are so good; I always want them to be long. But thanks for the one shot and hope you are feeling better!