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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update please i love this show me more of harry and let me see him paired with lucius soon it is a wonderful pairing i love it
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool.
I like the katana.
I like the katana.
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it. worth the wait. write more soon. <3s this story
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very good story, and kind of original. I did notice a few things that need to be fixed in this story. The first being that the S in Lestrange isn't capialized. Another is in this statement "that Harry was amazing the animal could pull off with how much that had to hurt" the word amazing should be amazed. I also noticed a few small words like "the, a, so," as well as a few others. Other than that a very well put together story.
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah great chapter can't wait to see what is going to happen. chapter 4
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I noticed Sirius said that most of the Blacks went to school in Naforia so what of Draco? Will he end up showing up there or does he have too much Malfoy. The story didn't say anything about them yet. I really like what you have done with this story. Please update soon.
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the story thus far.
The only mistake I have found is in this chapter toward the end.
lied should be lay.
The only mistake I have found is in this chapter toward the end.
lied should be lay.
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man this is good.
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just read it all and it's a the most original storyline I've seen so far!! Sooo I hope you will continue this!!!
I can't wait until they meet after 6 years I'm sure it will be a "fun" meeting hehe! If not sooner..
Please write more!!
I can't wait until they meet after 6 years I'm sure it will be a "fun" meeting hehe! If not sooner..
Please write more!!
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nah! Although surprisingly well written for, not only being on AFF, but also being an AU with new school, Harry's reactions to this new situation in his world seem far too unrealistic. Not to mention the fact that Sirius is alive and well... He indirectly 'killed' his godfather and now he almost cheerfully agrees to possibly allow it to happen again. Harry's been through too much to be so complacent with the way his life is turning out.
Even so am very much looking forward to more and to see where you're heading with this!
Cheers!
Even so am very much looking forward to more and to see where you're heading with this!
Cheers!