rate_review Reviews

Loved every word of it!!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

It wasn't crap. Try more details. Not bad at all, though. Cheers.

Hmm... What to say about this? I have mixed feelings. I thought that the sequence of events themselves was good, but I thought it could have been better described. The sex was a little rushed, and not really in a good way. I thought that Hermione felt that she was close to orgasm a little to early. I liked how shocked and annoyed Snape was when he realized she was enjoying though. I thought when Snape said "you have 8 mistakes" he was going to count them all off, but that didn't happen. :( The spanking part was one of the better written parts I think. I understand that this is your first fic, so I'm sure once you're a little more experienced you'll be much better, because it seems like you have good ideas. Oh yeah, one more thing - I suggest you capitalize your title... it looks very poor otherwise.

It sounds like it was definitely worth it. LOL. Any who I think your story was very good and that you use words well. Adios

You really have something going here, for a first FanFic it wasn't horrendous. I know that my first time I wanted to write something amazing, put on AFF and have tons of people review it but it's no that easy. You have to have something solid. I want you to take this with a grain of salt, what I'm about to say, although your story was a short read and moderately well done you most certainly could have expanded. You can produce a good one-shot (if that's what you want to call Was It Worth It? ) without creating a book. Hermione was believable in some aspects about her anger towards the grade but the lengths she went to for something as simple as an essay was kind of stretching it. Maybe if you snuck in a backstory of how she might be sexually repressed or on the rocks with someone her characterization in this Fic would have been a little easier to digest. Snape was as close to the real Snape as most people are going to get seeing as the book series allows insight into his persona but not detailed information like say Hermione or Ron. A few more cold remarks by him and a bit more coniving would have sealed the deal but I really do commend you for writing this. You're story is one of the better first-tries that I've read, some are absolutely horrendous and I look forward to seeing how you progress. I hope that I've helped you and not angered you.

Not crap at all! I'm impressed.

I liked it a lot. hope to see more of it. Or was this a one-shot?